Thursday, March 14, 2013

Custodian - third draft complete - dedicated to all our children's children

custodian cover concept
Free Planet (1: custodian) third draft complete.

As this first Free Planet novel was about three years in the research and a couple years in the writing, the front of the book and the back of the book needed 'stylistically welding'. I've edited, reworked and tightened up the opening chapters and gone through the rest of the opening part of the book so that it ties together better with the attitude, speed and style of the latter part of the book.

I also got rid of an awful lot of CAPITALISATION-for-emphasis in the rants of the re-wilded Asalah Al Faghori character because, "You're not that thick," and you'll know when you should be 'taking notice'. That's all done, and there's a new cover design.

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